Comments on Blog Entry

We wrote a blog entry where we worked together in a small group. We chose to discuss the food we are given in school and how it has gotten worse this past year. I feel like the length of the text was pretty okay, not too long and not too short. However, I feel like we could have written a bit more about what we wanted to improve and why instead of writing how we can solve it. We could have developed the part where we told exactly what we wanted the school board to change and give more expamples. I also feel like it was a bit less serious than we thought it would be. But overall, i'm pretty satisfied with how the text worked out.